Writing a Winning Resume 8
Examples
• Elected to Student Government as Treasurer
• Awarded All-Conference for 2013; three-year Captain of Varsity Track team
• Awarded Dean’s list for 2016 – 2017 academic year
SECTION III – Professional Experience
The heart of your resume is the organization and presentation of your professional experience.
Your goal is to highlight the skills/achievements most relevant and directly transferable to the
position you’re seeking. Describe your major activities (transactions and projects) but place the
greatest emphasis on accomplishments you can legitimately claim as your own.
Recommendations
• Use strong action verbs to begin each bullet (see list of examples on pages 12 – 13 in this
guide).
• Do not use personal pronouns such as “I,” “my,” “me,” etc.
• Include the city and state/country of work experience, don’t assume.
• Draw the connections between past experiences and the occupational skills required in the
role you are applying for. Readers often lack the time needed to draw inferences and make
connections based on resume bullets. Be as clear as possible about how your past
achievements relate to the position of interest.
• Ensure each bullet point reflects an accomplishment vs. a responsibility.
• Use the “SAR” (Situation – Action – Result) framework to write the accomplishment
statements. This includes describing the Situation (S), the Action taken (A) which might
include the analysis of the opportunity, the planning and preparation, and the resources
involved, and the Results (R) obtained. Be sure to state if you presented your results to
management and what next steps were taken.
• Expand upon accomplishments wherever possible:
o Improved quality, productivity, teamwork
o Increased sales, profits
o Reduced costs
o Planned/designed a program/training process to improve, reduce or change some
factor
o Decreased turnover, failures, breakdown, shrinkage, overtime, etc.
• To help you identify some of your accomplishments, consider:
o Did I train or in any way develop other employees?
o Did I receive any recognition or award?
o Did I point out the need for or create a new procedure?
o Did I improve customer service?