Now you can have, I think you can have shaggy efficiency, you know where a section when we step back
where we can say oh, this section exists to do A. But when you look at it, it does it a little bit slantwise, it
does a little in a kind of an anecdotal way, or it puts in some, you know. So all of that is part of sort of
meta-efficiency, which I think is really just a function of the form. You know you've only got 9 pages or
300, so therefore you know it's understood that things should be to purpose I guess.
AV
Could you talk more about efficiency in the novel and in Lincoln in particular because maybe that was a
departure for you too, not just in length, but in pastiche, in bringing other quotations into the work and
arranging, in addition to narrating.
GS
I mean, when I first realized it was going to be a novel, I got a little bit ecstatic like, oh now I can be
wasteful. You know, I can, just you know. But then it turns out that isn't true, and so one of the you
know, what I found writing this book was that I was always developing rules, so rules for the fictive
world is kind of sci-fi afterlife, but also rules, formal rules, rules about the form of the book, and one of
them that developed pretty quickly, was that if I was going to use, if I was going to interject a historical
section, it had to be in causal relationship to what came before and after. So it, you know, because I
mean the number of historical sections could be infinite, so therefore you need a basis for selection and
it started to become, just like in a story, you know, you look at the section and say why are you here in
my story. And it gets a guilty look on its face and goes because I'm really funny and you go uh uh, that's
not quite enough.
In the book I mentioned this thing that I called the Cornfeld principle after this guy Stuart Cornfeld who
was a friend of mine and a movie producer. And he said that in a script and I think it's true of any
narrative. A section, ideally not, you know, not absolutely, but ideally should both be entertaining in its
own right and should advance the story in a meaningful way. So if you apply that standard, you know
the section that's just funny might have to wait outside because it's you know. Likewise, the section
that's only functional, that isn't very fun or vivid but does the work of proving something that also has to
be reconsidered.
So in Lincoln the structure got strict on me quicker than I would have liked it to in the requirement that
these historical sections had to be justified a little bit, so that was another form of efficiency. And
actually the book you know I just outlined it. I'm trying to write a screenplay and I was really, you know,
kind of happy that it's quite, with a few exceptions, it's caused, you know, section A causes Section B
and things aren't there just for whimsicality and partly you know, because in a work like that, or like
really my stories too which are kind of strange, there's some kind of mathematical relationship between
efficiency of form and strangeness of presentation.
So in other words, if you're asking the reader to believe that Lincoln in a graveyard at night with a bunch
of ghosts, efficiency of form is your friend because they say, well, there doesn't seem to be any silliness