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Writing a research proposal for a BIF PhD fellowship
by U. Benjamin Kaupp, former Trustee of the BIF
The following is a list of recommendations that should be followed when preparing your
application for a BIF PhD fellowship. Although the following points may seem obvious, they are
ignored surprisingly often. As a result, seemingly excellent candidates fail to obtain a fellowship,
simply because their proposals do not conform to these minimal standards.
1. Layout
Use font size 12, 1.5 spacing, and a margin of 2.5 cm or 1 inch. This is not a niggling formality,
because some applicants apparently have difficulties to keep it short. Choosing font size 10 and
single spacing is not an acceptable solution.
2. Length
For the description of your research project (i.e. proposal, excluding CV, etc.) three pages are defi-
nitely too short, 15 pages are definitely too long. The proposal should be as concise as possible,
yet contain all the information necessary for its evaluation by an expert in the field, as well as by
scientists from related disciplines. It is this successful balancing act between conciseness and
comprehensibility that makes for a good application.
3. Illustrations
Illustrations can help understand complex subject matter, such as a research proposal. The
illustrations should be used sparingly and made to serve the purpose of your application. Do not
just use a graph or picture that happens to be in your power point collection. Modify pictures to
match the specific needs of your proposal. Each figure should be accompanied by a legend that
contains all the information needed to understand the picture. Explain abbreviations. Make sure
that everything in the picture can be deciphered without the use of a magnifying glass.
4. Preparation
Carefully craft your application. Do not “copy-and-paste” parts from your thesis advisor’s NIH or
DFG grant or from your master’s thesis. Make use of sub-headings, paragraphs, etc. to structure
the text according to the inherent logic of your research project.
The length of the individual parts should be balanced. The summary should not be longer than
two-thirds of a page. Write an introduction to the subject of your research. What is known? What
is unknown? What is controversial? Why is it important to know all that? What is your own
ground work (if applicable)? Then state specifically the scope and objectives of your proposal.
This introduction should consist of 24 pages. If your research is successful as planned, how
would we have advanced our understanding of this scientific problem (ca. 0.51page)?
Put great emphasis and care on the section that describes your approach in general and the
experiments in particular (experimental strategy approx. 45 pages). This should represent the
core of your proposal. Be specific rather than general, but avoid giving unnecessary details such
as the ingredients of a buffer solution, unless they are truly essential to the success of your
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endeavour. Include alternative approaches for important parts of the project that are particularly
risky.
Finally, add your work schedule for a three year project and do not forget references. More than
30, however, are rarely necessary. Include all authors and full titles of the mainly primary
research papers you cite.